Final Draft Essay

I have finished editing the essay in the final draft, cutting out any parts that are not important or as related to the topic I am researching. I have also extended my practical response as I didn't think analysing the ambiguity of hands would be enough on their own. I therefore created new cover pages for each of 'Breakfast On The Grass', 'The Hand' and 'The Glass Harmonica'. I made them more specific to hands and also exaggerated the amount of oppression shown in them. I did this to clarify the films' intended messages and help illustrate their subversive natures to back up my argument.